Monday, August 10, 2009

yawn

nothing
solved nothing
re
solved nothing ab- solved

just a winding down
whether or not
i want
tomorrow

not enough time
but what would be enough

2 comments:

Stacia said...

I often seem to hear a rhythm to your poems, almost like beatnik poetry. Is this what you intend when you write them?

I like what this poem says. It rings true to me =)

Doug Hagler said...

ooh, i'm happy to hear that :) yeah, i am often going for a particular rhythm, and these first-thought poems are definitely beatnik-y. i can also see how i fall into the same/similar rhythms from one to the next; hopefully that will diversify over time (though unlike most poets, you're seeing only 'rough drafts' - i have to assume even the greats didn't produce gems every time)